Preparing wording options

I'm thinking of providing 2-3 phrasing options in Chinese, focusing on a more formal or concise style, along with their English translations. This approach seems useful while avoiding unnecessary verbosity.
I'll acknowledge the current state, then present some refined Chinese variations and their corresponding English translations. It might be a good idea to ask if they want to include any specific context or date source as well, but I'll keep everything concise.
要不要我帮你润色/翻译这条数据?这里有几种表述:

需要我补充具体比赛对手/日期或查证来源吗?
